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I came and I conquered
his body his soul and the top
claimed it with a broken sword
I thought I had found my salvation
with the road to heaven already closed

and then he came like a hurricane
filling every left untouched space
toying with things the way I used to
now though it was anything but fair
I felt hatred entwine with love

felt everything simmer under too heavy
eyelids

loneliness fell heavily onto me
like cloth onto dead man's bed
he tried to shush it with his flesh
minute after minute but to no avail
I was already dammed

so lost in the other's eyes

I could have forsaken anything
yet there was no need
'cause the already old joke
of an unfulfilled love
was this time

on me
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Nov 2, 2012  Professional Writer
'loneliness fell heavily onto me
like cloth onto dead man's bed.'

Wonderful poetry...
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:iconamarum:
~Amarum Jan 1, 2013   Writer
Thank you! I'm getting back to replying people, finally.

Happy New Year! Have you been dancing all night yesterday? ;)
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
How did you know? :giggle:
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:iconamarum:
~Amarum Jan 6, 2013   Writer
:D

Guess everybody but me did that. I was too busy writing tons of essays. Had a good time, then? :)
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes. They had this red champagne that was pretty nasty. It tasted like caramel. :lol:
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:iconamarum:
~Amarum Jan 6, 2013   Writer
Hhahaah, I drank Russian/Ukrainian champagne that's really popular round here. It tasted much better than the first time I had a taste :D
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