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i look at myself in the mirror looking analysing counting changes that blur away my mistakes and fears with years passing with photos taken with smiles changed and tears still shimmering at the bridges of my eyelids there in the happiest of poses I could have possibly stricken I look myself in the eye only as far as water and cool glass will enable to find the truth to find the source of a fire that lets me sit here and contemplate and think and feel that yes this is the promised land and as amazed as I can be I stare and remember the thousandth mile I crossed and the heavy weight just behind my heart that keeps me short of breath when I e
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